Showing posts with label Legacy of Kings. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Legacy of Kings. Show all posts

Saturday, September 5, 2015

Legacy of Kings by Eleanor Herman: Review

Synopsis:

Imagine a time when the gods turn a blind eye to the agony of men, when the last of the hellions roam the plains and evil stirs beyond the edges of the map. A time when cities burn, and in their ashes, empires rise.

Alexander, Macedonia’s sixteen-year-old heir, is on the brink of discovering his fated role in conquering the known world but finds himself drawn to newcomer Katerina, who must navigate the dark secrets of court life while hiding her own mission: kill the Queen. But Kat’s first love, Jacob, will go to unthinkable lengths to win her, even if it means competing for her heart with Hephaestion, a murderer sheltered by the prince. And far across the sea, Zofia, a Persian princess and Alexander’s unmet fiancée, wants to alter her destiny by seeking the famed and deadly Spirit Eaters.

Weaving fantasy with the salacious and fascinating details of real history, New York Times bestselling author Eleanor Herman reimagines the greatest emperor the world has ever known: Alexander the Great, in the first book of the Blood of Gods and Royals series.

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"Questions are answered not when you want an answer but when the time for answers is right."

I was beyond excited about this book. In the end, however, I couldn't help feeling disappointed. The thing about Legacy of Kings is that it has a lot of potential and it does have a decent background, but the chaotic plot and character development ruins it.

The potential lies in the complexity of this world. Set in an era of the ancient empires, magic hides in plain sight. Six teenagers are maneuvering their way to success. Secrets run deep in the book. If manipulated correctly, this book could be an epic masterpiece. Setting things in a brutal time of history does make things more interesting. You seriously can't complain about magic and cruelty blended into one. Despite my fondness towards these aspects, there's no way I can give this book a four or even a five out of five. There are just fundamental problems that cannot be mended.

Prioritizing characters is a big problem. The book actually reminds me of Falling Kingdoms in a messy way (because of the point of views). And Falling Kingdoms is nothing close to "messy" (It's definitely one of my favorite series of all time). Six plus narrators? In thirty-two chapters? There's practically no room to be familiar with one character! It's extremely hard to manage six "main" characters, and some of them have fallen out of my mind.

I have divided the six "main" characters into two groups. The first being Alex, Jacob and Zofia. These are the invisibles. I opened the book fully expecting Alex to be the main player of the story. But his chapters were so scattered that he barely even made an acquaintance in my opinion. Jacob is the same, except his perspective were even more scattered. Zofia shared more chapters. Except she's too impulsive for her own good, and nothing really intriguing happened to her. They barely made a bleep in my mind. Kat, Heph and Cyn are in the second group. They actually made an impact in my mind. But the only one I actually like is Heph. His loyalty and fierceness are certainly admirable. I really hate that there aren't enough chapters where he is at the center stage. Kat is the one I have no problem reading about. But I don't particularly like her either. Unlike the other five characters, she actually shows some traits of being the main girl in a YA novel. Cyn has made the biggest impact in my mind, but in a very bad way. I hate to say it, but she actually disgusts me. Her manipulative ways and heartlessness pisses me off. She also has a twisted sense of loyalty and a thirst of power that is just terrifying and repulsive. I understand her pain and her desire for revenge. But this is way too much. You see, there are characters that are left out of the story. Either create a story with characters having distinctive traits or just cut the numbers down. Don't create six "main" characters and neglect half of them.

But the one thing that truly angers me is how misleading the summary is. It focuses on things that aren't even important in the real book. Why was Jacob mentioned in the summary when he hardly made a presence in the book? And how is Cyn not there, when she actually shared more chapters than Alex did? What about the Spirit Eaters? They didn't even show up in the book! They were mentioned and that was it. It's like I'm reading a different book. If you want to write a detailed summary, put something at least marginally related, not something that gets out hopes up and diminishes it. Or write a general summary. Misleading synopsis is the true demise of the book.

I'm still going to read the second book because the ending is surprisingly not bad, after all the disappointment. I hope the second book will be better.

Rating: 5/10

Sunday, August 2, 2015

TBR #27: August 2015

Whoops. I think I missed July.

1) Public Enemies (Immortal Game #2) by Ann Aguirre

Synopsis:

In Book 2 of the Immortal Game trilogy, Edie must learn the rules of the game . . . and then play better than anyone else.

Through a Faustian bargain, Edie Kramer has been pulled into the dangerous world of the Immortal Game, where belief makes your nightmares real. Hungry for sport, fears-made-flesh are always raising the stakes. To them, human lives are less than nothing, just pieces on a board.

Because of her boyfriend Kian's sacrifice, she's operating under the mysterious Harbinger's aegis, but his patronage could prove as fatal as the opposition. Raw from deepest loss, she's terrified over the deal Kian made for her. Though her very public enemies keep sending foot soldiers--mercenary monsters committed to her destruction--she's not the one playing under a doom clock. Kian has six months...unless Edie can save him. And this is a game she can't bear to lose. 

Expected Publication: August 4, 2015

2) Daughter of Dusk (Midnight Thief #2) by Livia Blackburne

Synopsis:

After learning the truth about her bloodlines, Kyra can’t help but feel like a monster.

Though she’s formed a tentative alliance with the Palace, Kyra must keep her identity a secret or risk being hunted like the rest of her Demon Rider kin. Tristam and the imprisoned assassin James are among the few who know about her heritage, but when Tristam reveals a heartbreaking secret of his own, Kyra’s not sure she can trust him. And with James’s fate in the hands of the palace, Kyra fears that he will give her away to save himself.

As tensions rise within Forge's Council, and vicious Demon Rider attacks continue in surrounding villages, Kyra knows she must do something to save her city. But she walks a dangerous line between opposing armies: will she be able to use her link to the Demon Riders for good, or will her Makvani blood prove to be deadly?

In this spellbinding sequel to Midnight Thief, Kyra and Tristam face their biggest battle yet as they grapple with changing allegiances, shocking deceit, and vengeful opponents.

Expected Publication: August 4, 2015

3) Court of Fives (Court of Fives #1) by Kate Elliot

Synopsis:

In this imaginative escape into an enthralling new world, World Fantasy Award finalist Kate Elliott begins a new trilogy with her debut young adult novel, weaving an epic story of a girl struggling to do what she loves in a society suffocated by rules of class and privilege.

Jessamy's life is a balance between acting like an upper class Patron and dreaming of the freedom of the Commoners. But at night she can be whomever she wants when she sneaks out to train for The Fives, an intricate, multi-level athletic competition that offers a chance for glory to the kingdom's best competitors. Then Jes meets Kalliarkos, and an unlikely friendship between a girl of mixed race and a Patron boy causes heads to turn. When a scheming lord tears Jes's family apart, she'll have to test Kal's loyalty and risk the vengeance of a powerful clan to save her mother and sisters from certain death.

Expected Publication: August 18, 2015

4) Legacy of Kings (Blood of Gods and Royals #1) by Eleanor Herman

Synopsis:

Imagine a time when the gods turn a blind eye to the agony of men, when the last of the hellions roam the plains and evil stirs beyond the edges of the map. A time when cities burn, and in their ashes, empires rise.

Alexander, Macedonia’s sixteen-year-old heir, is on the brink of discovering his fated role in conquering the known world but finds himself drawn to newcomer Katerina, who must navigate the dark secrets of court life while hiding her own mission: kill the Queen. But Kat’s first love, Jacob, will go to unthinkable lengths to win her, even if it means competing for her heart with Hephaestion, a murderer sheltered by the prince. And far across the sea, Zofia, a Persian princess and Alexander’s unmet fiancée, wants to alter her destiny by seeking the famed and deadly Spirit Eaters.

Weaving fantasy with the salacious and fascinating details of real history, New York Times bestselling author Eleanor Herman reimagines the greatest emperor the world has ever known: Alexander the Great, in the first book of the Blood of Gods and Royals series.

Expected Publication: August 25, 2015